Integrating Higher-Order Thinking Skills (HOTS) into Essay Writing Instruction for Low-Achieving Students: A Two-Cycle Collaborative Action Research Study

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Sylvester Yueh Wei Lau
Zuraini Seruji
Noor Aina Dani

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Many educators believe that low-achieving students can’t handle higher-order thinking tasks, which may hinder their growth and potential. This study employed a two-cycle collaborative action research design using a mixed-methods approach, and incorporating classroom observations, teacher interviews, and pre- and post-writing assessments, which were analysed using a paired-samples t-test. The participants were 3 Malay language teachers and 47 low-achieving students, all aged 16, from 3 rural secondary schools in Sarawak, Malaysia. The students’ writing performance was analysed quantitatively, while the teachers participated in classroom implementation, intervention and interview. The classroom observation results indicate that teachers rely more on the analysing cognitive domain. A process-based approach enhances higher-order thinking skills in essay writing among low achievers, thereby improving classroom teaching and learning. There was a significant difference between pre- and post-writing assessments, with average essay scores improving by approximately -19.47 points after the intervention. In conclusion, educators knowledgeable about HOTS cognitive domains play a crucial role in supporting struggling students to foster essay-writing abilities. For low achievers, a process-based approach is more effective than a modular approach for enhancing higher-order thinking in essay writing. Teachers should motivate students at all academic levels to participate in tasks that utilise higher-order thinking skills.

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Lau, S. Y. W., Seruji, Z., & Dani, N. A. (2026). Integrating Higher-Order Thinking Skills (HOTS) into Essay Writing Instruction for Low-Achieving Students: A Two-Cycle Collaborative Action Research Study. LEARN Journal: Language Education and Acquisition Research Network, 19(2), 501–531. https://doi.org/10.70730/RIWN8939
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Author Biographies

Sylvester Yueh Wei Lau, Faculty of Education, Language and Communication, Universiti Malaysia Sarawak, Malaysia

A PhD candidate from the Faculty of Education, Language and Communication, Universiti Malaysia Sarawak (UNIMAS). Currently, he is an education officer in training with the Education Sponsorship Division of the Ministry of Education Malaysia.

Zuraini Seruji, Faculty of Education, Language and Communication, Universiti Malaysia Sarawak, Malaysia

A Senior Lecturer and the Deputy Director of the Student Development Centre at Universiti Malaysia Sarawak. She holds a diploma and a doctorate in language and linguistics. Her areas of specialisation include psycholinguistics, sociolinguistics, and ethnolinguistics.

Noor Aina Dani, Faculty of Modern Languages and Communication, Universiti Putra Malaysia, Malaysia

A distinguished alumna of Universiti Putra Malaysia, where she earned her doctorate in secondary education. With a strong focus on second-language teaching and learning and applied linguistics, she is committed to advancing educational practices and enhancing language acquisition across diverse learning environments.

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